Thursday, October 13, 2011
To Be Heard Review
The video To Be Heard was a good video overall. I can say people hearts were felt. The pain they face and how they struggle. They came across people that hurt them in their childhood or years that they have been living. they became emotional it may have changed their lives that made them wanna express them self with poem. The director made a video of people who express how they felt the pain they went through. They all went through a lot of things in their life such as problems with their parents. They all had a very blunt poem that was described with emotion, fear and courage that they upheld. They also had group talks that helped them as a group find there selves and why may they be too sensitive or could this be rage that may cause tears that may cost a loss you don't want to except. This can help people who suffer from being hurt to becoming strong. The director filmed this video to show people how many people suffer everyday to hatred and comments that may hurt feelings, there is solutions to reliving your feelings. The director filmed this video also to show no matter what people say you are your own person also to be strong and you will always do better.
Wednesday, October 12, 2011
This is a poem called Just Me. I wrote this during a power writers work shop to express how I feel about my self. I wanna come more closer to ma self. I also wrote this to to tell people that they don't know them self as much as they think they do. I also want to express may daily feeling when i wake up.
the..happiest person on the world
never down always up
always loved no fear
because I know I can be who I wanna be
no stop signs just big GO
no doubts just keep ma glow
not worried just always certain
but I would not call it perfect
I am just ma own man
no fans no groups
keep to my self I am ma own troops
always keep a straight life never any loops
no struggles like moving a mountain
flow like water Poland spring
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